Good job with the editing Theres just one thing. I think that the dress in the after is too bright that it takes the effect away from the model herself, and gives her more of a 'I'm not beautiful enought' sort of look. (I'm not saying that shes nt beautiful, im just saying that her dress sort of makes her look more like she is trying to disguise her beauty by stealing your attention)
I really like the after affect of the olors and the warmness that it brings.
do you mind me asking you how you retouch photos? =o